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Location: Fleming Beach / Macauley Pt boat launch.

We'd had a freak fog wave roll through. I drove down to the boat launch, hoping to get some fog on the water shots. No such luck. But the sunset was beautiful.

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The concept and layout are great. Just as a sunset should be, the foreground is perfectly silhouetted and the sun is bright and lights the clouds well. The sun-rays above the breakwater are great too.

The biggest issue I see with this image is that there is noise in the distant hills. Just to the left of the seagull on the post those hills aren't grey or dark grey as they should be, they have red pixels and blue pixels, a digital noise pattern. A noise reduction filter in photoshop would be one way to fix this. Another might be to use a localized blur technique.

Hopefully this helps you fix the issues and make better pictures.
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